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RE: DARK MESSIAH TV Series Pilot Logline

Thanks for posting this Lee

3 years ago
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RE: DARK MESSIAH TV Series Pilot Logline

I like your take but then it comes down to who is the central character the reporter or the mother.

3 years ago
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RE: February Winners Announced

AWESOME!!!!!! THANK YOU!!!!!

3 years ago
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RE: DARK MESSIAH TV Series Pilot Logline

Very unique concept! I think Geoffrey’s pared down rewrite is great but my question to you, Leewriter1, is “mistakenly” important to the story? Did …

3 years ago
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RE: DARK MESSIAH TV Series Pilot Logline

Oh, that is really interesting! I want to think on this a bit longer but here is a quick shot of a shorter version. A drug-addled mother lies ab…

3 years ago
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RE: Does your script have to have a B story to be successful?

Can you have one plot for a script? Absolutely but I find that without a B-heart plot, your script will read as more concept heavy and lack emotional …

3 years ago
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RE: Jojo Rabbit – Script Study

How did you feel about the movie having watched it after so many people told you not to? I am quite curious on your feedback. My son falls into this t…

3 years ago
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RE: FLASHBACKS

Happy to help! Feel free to hit me up on here if you need anything else screenwriting đŸ˜‰

3 years ago
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RE: Infinity Pool

Pretty amazing. The apple doesn’t fall far from the tree with this Cronenberg!

3 years ago
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RE: FLASHBACKS

Thank you!

3 years ago
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RE: FLASHBACKS

Great question! Flashbacks used to be considered cliche but over the past few years, they have come back into style. In my opinion, if Flashbacks are …

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RE: Jojo Rabbit – Script Study

I think the use of mirrors is a brilliant use of visual subtext of how nazism is scarring the youth and making them not just ugly on the outside but o…

3 years ago
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RE: Jojo Rabbit – Script Study

It is def the turning point for him from fantasy to reality of the situation. The key is that he chooses not to which defines his character as a good …

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