Your script isn’t broken.
It’s just not working yet.

Most screenplays don’t fail because the idea is bad. They fail because something underneath it isn’t landing; structure, pacing, or character clarity.

THE REAL PROBLEM

You’ve put time into your script.
You’ve rewritten it. And still… something’s off.
  • The opening doesn’t hook
  • The middle drags
  • The ending doesn’t hit
  • Or the feedback you’re getting isn’t actually helpful

That’s not a talent problem.

It’s a clarity problem.

WHAT I ACTUALLY DO

I help writers take scripts that almost work… and turn them into scripts that actually do.
No fluff. No vague notes. No Generic Feedback
Just clear breakdowns written by Geoffrey that show you: (Page by Page Notes)
  • What’s not working
  • Why it’s not working
  • Exactly what to do next
I do this because I’ve been there. I know how hard it is to learn this craft and find your way in this industry. I’ve been fortunate enough to have my scripts made into movies, and now I want to share what I’ve learned to help you become a stronger screenwriter and write a better screenplay.

OFFERS

Script Notes & Coverage

A full breakdown with clear, actionable feedback.
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1:1 Consulting

We go deeper; line by line, beat by beat.
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Mentorship

For writers serious about getting their script ready for industry eyes
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I’ve worked with writers at every stage;

From first drafts to scripts preparing for submission.
And the pattern is always the same:
The scripts that work… are the ones that are clear.

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