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Nov 12, 2023 8:32 pm
After a horrific onstage accident, a Vegas performer becomes a recluse but is given a second chance when a Native Spirit grants him the power of true invisibility.
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Nov 16, 2023 2:21 pm
I like the premise - but what’s the conflict the protagonist needs to endure once he gets his second chance?
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Nov 17, 2023 10:04 pm
I agree. We need a bit more of the antagonist and the characters conflict he must overcome.
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Nov 17, 2023 10:18 pm