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Logline for "Seeing is Believing"

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After a horrific onstage accident, a Vegas performer becomes a recluse but is given a second chance when a Native Spirit grants him the power of true invisibility.

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I like the premise - but what’s the conflict the protagonist needs to endure once he gets his second chance?

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I agree. We need a bit more of the antagonist and the characters conflict he must overcome.

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