Script Diagnosis

$295.00

Get detailed, bullet-point notes on your screenplay. I’ll read your entire script and give you direct feedback on what’s working, what isn’t, and what I believe will make the script stronger.

What you’ll receive:

  • Detailed bullet-point notes organized by category
  • Feedback on story, structure, character, pacing, dialogue, and theme
  • Identification of weak spots, story problems, and missed opportunities
  • Suggestions and solutions for strengthening the script
  • Clear priorities for your rewrite

This isn’t coverage. No scores. No pass/consider/recommend. I’m reading your screenplay as a produced writer and giving you feedback for your next draft.

This service does not include notes on every individual page. For that level of detail, see my Page-by-Page Notes service.

Turnaround time: 1–2 weeks

Want to talk through your notes? Add a 1-hour consultation for $125.