I work with you one-on-one, applying the same story analysis process I use on my own projects and with professional collaborators. This is not coaching, coverage, or generalized advice. It is hands-on, craft-driven mentorship centered on your script and its next draft.
No AI tools or outsourcing are used at any stage of this process.
Workflow
• Step 1: Page-by-Page Script Analysis
I complete a full diagnostic read with detailed page-by-page notes identifying core story issues, strengths, and opportunities for improvement.
• Step 2: First Video Session
A one-hour video session to break down the notes, clarify direction, and establish a focused revision plan.
• Step 3: Revision Period
You revise independently, applying the guidance to your script.
• Step 4: Second Video Session
A one-hour video session to refine choices, address new challenges, and course-correct where needed.
• Step 5: Final Review Memo
A targeted written memo outlining remaining issues, next steps, and priorities for the next draft.
What’s Included
• One full page-by-page script analysis
• Two private one-hour video sessions with Geoffrey D. Calhoun
• A final written review memo
• Professional guidance grounded in real production experience
Important Notes
This is a project-based mentorship, not ongoing coaching or unlimited feedback. Sessions are scheduled in advance, and guidance is delivered through structured meetings and written notes to ensure focused, uninterrupted attention on each project.
Availability is limited.
