Get detailed, bullet-point notes on every page of your screenplay. This is comprehensive, high-level feedback designed to sharpen your story, tighten your structure, and elevate the entire draft.
What you’ll receive:
Clear notes discussing every single page of your script
Guidance on story structure, character arcs, pacing, theme, and dialogue
Identification of weak spots, opportunities, and story gaps
Direct, honest feedback you can use to strengthen your rewrite
Actionable insights from a produced screenwriter with films on Lifetime, streaming, and in theaters
This isn’t generic coverage. It’s a page-by-page breakdown crafted personally by me. No AI, no outsourcing, no templates.
You’ll walk away with a clear roadmap for your rewrite and a deeper understanding of how to make your script stand out.
