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I'm starting to feel your pain. lol

I agree, you're right about drifting off a little (or alot), I'm really struggling with the protagonist though as I split the whole story in two. So t...

Let's be honest you already had everything there. I just played around with it a little. Sounds like a strong premise for a script.

With the vultures still picking at the bones of his failed career an unrepentant celebrity chef attempts to relaunch his career while he struggles wit...

You really helped me to think from a different POV with the logline. I was losing what the story was about and the aesthetic of it. Thanks so much for...

I really had a hard time finding anything even remotely close to the overall premise. I'm sure there are lots out there, but I can't find any. Some...

Thank you both so much this has really helped to focus my thoughts having someone to bouncy my ideas off. This is my latest attempt. I've spent most...

Do you think I should add some reference to the fake reality (the lies) that from that started to become true and refer to it as fate or something lik...

I wrote this before using the framework and then put my next attempt below. Let me know if you think it's better. I think it sounds much better. ...

Great attempt. thanks for the inspiration. I've made another attempt. well ... It's still not right but it's better hopefully what do you think? ...

Thanks for your comments, Chris. I think you're right about the lack of focus. I was trying to be clever with the ending as the lies that he had been ...