Okay, you’ve got me interested. I’ll try to give it a watch this weekend.

And I appreciate it! I’ll take all the help I can get. 🙂 I like what you did with it!

It probably needs a lot more work. 🙂

It’s hard to say without reading the actual script. The whole purpose of the log line is to tease the story – make the reader (producer) WANT to read …

I think you’re closer- it still feels a little word heavy to me. it also doesn’t really say what the protagonist is ultimately up against (unless I’…

It’s all about the cook time on the chicken. a decent sized breast of chicken pan fried is gonna be several minutes in each side. I guess I was h…

Hmm. Thinking he’s being haunted by his best friends ghost Donal investigates the murder only to discover his friend is alive, and now as he que…

As I read the above log line I’m not sure what the story is actually about? what’s the ultimate goal of the character/plot? I like the twist, a lo…

This close! 🙂

Me too! And thank you. I just hope I can keep it all fun and jovial. 🙂

Yes actually. we’d eaten at the local Vietnamese place and loved it. But as my wife ordered it she mentioned, “they close in 9 minutes, so who knows…

Hey Geoffrey, my count is up to 917 as of today…