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This is closer than the first attempt. We need a bit more though. Give us the pathos of That Man as the lead into the logline then what he needs to do…

You can write it out as a specific dialogue like word salad from a stroke victim or you can do it as a descriptive action if they were speaking in ton…

Oh good! I spoke with a filmmaker who did the kickstarter thing and offered exclusive swag for supporters. They said it was a total nightmare and lost…

WHAT?! Wow! You are soooo close now.

Which one sparks something inside of you? Or are you looking to flex a bit and try something new?

That’s an interesting pilot. Was this something you were thinking of doing as a feature as well? Currently, I am working on a true-life adaptation rig…

That’s awesome of you. I haven’t been on Kickstarter in forever. Are filmmakers still finding funding with those? I know most people burned out after …

Lots of great tips here from Irina and Katie. Chris, you nailed that logline! Thanks for posting Octavio.

You’re off to a good start! Also consider personal stakes. What is your central character’s motivation? Give the audience something they can connect w…

Thank you for posting this!