Shaun, it’s coming along! Rework it again with our framework. I also agree with Chris to not bury the story here. So, I’ll start you off but I don’t w…

Wow. Your wife is incredibly insightful. I’ve never actually had Vietnamese food so I wouldn’t be able to tell if its good or not!

Hi, Shaun have you tried following the logline builder we have? We also have some nice samples on that page you can use as a guide. I have to agree wi…

Oh no! Bad takeout?

LOL! You did fine. Everyone hates their voice. I’m looking forward to the next one!

What?! Almost there!!!

That’s ok. It’s part of your voice as a writer!

It’s a masterclass in writing television.

Better. Paint the picture a little more clearly with the stakes and the antagonist. No use making it vague. We want to be able to see the movie from…

Yeah the numbers will def be off next quarter. False profits.

I love the fact that her husband truly loves her but is actually the antagonist out for himself.

Still haven’t gotten to that one. However I did begin The Diplomat which is absolutely incredible.

That is true every streamer has lost money this quarter except for Peacock for some reason. We will see some big cut backs on original content now. Th…

That’s lovely. We had a great one. Spent time with my mom and family.