Other then going through several rounds of edits. I started a new script that’s sort of a mystery/suspense/horror.
what genre are you working on?
Other then going through several rounds of edits. I started a new script that’s sort of a mystery/suspense/horror.
what genre are you working on?
Best,
Chris O’Bryant
@obryantcj
Mine is a horror suspense I just started. I’m about 20 pages in, but I thought I’d a new, more visual opening sequence the other night so I’m probably going to rewrite my first 5 or 6 pages this weekend before I charge further into what’s coming.
Best,
Chris O’Bryant
@obryantcj
This time I actually did a small outline (usually I’m a pantser).
This is, at its heart a mystery, so I wanted to have specific beats where clues are dropped and layered into the narrative smoothly.
Best,
Chris O’Bryant
@obryantcj
I try. 🙂
of course, I’ve been told I’m very trying. 🙂
Best,
Chris O’Bryant
@obryantcj
I rewrote the first 14 pages over the weekend to better bring out the visuals and (hopefully) show the tone better.
and remove all the God Awful exposition I littered the initial pages with.
it reads better (still not perfect).
but I’ve got the first 21 pages complete now and have a 3 day weekend coming up to work on it. 🙂
Best,
Chris O’Bryant
@obryantcj
Good man! Keep it up! Let me know when you get to mid act 2.
Will do! 🙂
Best,
Chris O’Bryant
@obryantcj